A Critique of Miracle

'Miracle' is the story of the 1980 United States ice hockey team. The coach of this team is Herb Brooks. In many years ago, he was a hockey player, but he did not go into the hockey tournament with his partner. So he hopes his students can win the champion for them and American.
He is very strict with his students .At the first, they were hardly to accept these training way. Somebody even wanted to leave. His training way let these hockey players become a team. From this day, they are desirous of the champion of the hockey tournament. .
Unfortunately, they run into Russia. Russia has the best hockey team of the world. Russia's main weapon is intimidation. They won many times in the hockey tournament .They are generally acknowledged as the champion of the world by everyone. The United States ice hockey team meet problem.
Finally, the United States ice hockey team hangs together. They beat the Russia's ice hockey team win the champion.You got what you pay for. Nothing impossible, you have to try your best.

'Miracle' is the story of the 1980 United States ice hockey team.
yes,it is the story about an ice hockey team.i think it can let me know what is the most important for me.

and i need to write an article about a movie.so i choose Miracle as the material of my work.

This semester my english teacher has been changed.My teacher has many different methods , now.They are different even strange.But I have to accept.